Dark Storm After The Light It's Over My Broken Rage It's Over From My Vanish Life Take Me, I Run To You And Show Me Your Beauty Side And Save Me With Your Sacrifice
And Dance, Dance For My Soul Dance For My Eyes Deceive Me Again Change, Change All My Thoughts Kill Other Dreams Rule All My Sense And Take Me Home.
Dark Moon Before The Sun And Prayers From Gothic Nights Relive Me After The Cry Lead Me In Other Time I Feel You A Part Of Me Inside From My Rising Dreams
And Fly, Fly On My Cold Fly For My Life Deceive Me Again Change, Change Other Thoughts Rule All My Days Untill The End Let The Curtain Fall
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Model and Editor ME ... but I warn you... this is one of my first photoshop art works... and the ORIGINAL PICTURE is made with nothing else but a MOBILE PHONE CAMERA So please , be gentle
I wanted to delete it, but I said it's fair that people know the beggning works, and the actual ones... if it's a progress or not.
Good portret. But one thing I guess there is not enough space on the left side, in the front of chin. So the face would be in right composotion space. One of photo composition rules is - nothing have to add, and nothing have to remove. Sorry about that, but i think is my critique will help you in the future. Good luck!
Yeap, it's a great and useful advice ! Thank you But this is one of my oldest compositions and If I'll tell you thet the original picture was made with a mobile phone... you would kill me right? It's somehow my first artwork in photoshop I only have a little digital camera bought 3 months ago, and I wanted to delete the old stuff, but then I imagined people wanting to see the evolution or the beggining and the end. Thank you so much for taking time for leaving a good picture analise.. Good luck also ! I might come again to your gallery and grab some more art pieces in my collection of faves. Don't worry, I don't want nothng back,I just collect pieces for my feature news articles , wich are about to come.
Awesome art , keep up this amazing work you do and have a good day. Cya !
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You made that picture ( portret ) with a mobile phone? Wow! I thought you did it using digital camera with postrendering in PS... Your first work in PS no bad... Realy. Now you have a digital camera, so don`t waste the time! You on the right way, and you should work farther. You are talent girl. I belive in you! And if my artworks will hepl you, it would be great pleasure for me. Wish you luck! And keep working on your photos
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One of photo composition rules is - nothing have to add, and nothing have to remove.
Sorry about that, but i think is my critique will help you in the future.
Good luck!
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Awesome art , keep up this amazing work you do and have a good day. Cya !
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Wish you luck! And keep working on your photos
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